Tuesday, September 16, 2014

An example of a controversy analysis in progress

This is by no means perfect.  It is still a work in progress.  The thing to focus on is how often the writer talks about the ideas and talk of others, as opposed to their own ideas and talk.  Also, note their use of sociological ideas, which are in bold and underlined.  I've included some of the comments that I left for the writer of this draft; they might be helpful to you.


            For years, the morality of assisted suicide has been heatedly debated.  The right of a physician to assist someone in euthanizing themselves has been put into question.  The focus of this report is the controversy surrounding the question “Is assisted suicide morally right or wrong?”
            In the 1980’s and 1990’s, a physician named Dr. Jack Kervorkian participated in physician-assisted suicide with over 130 patients.  Terminally ill patients who didn’t have long to live would go to Dr. Kervorkian for help.  He would then hook the patients up to a machine he had constructed himself, and the patient would press a button that would release the euthanizing chemicals into their body, ending their life.  Dr. Kervorkian’s services caused quite an uproar in the public’s collective conscience, or the shared values of society (ES, 14).  After much debate and many disagreements, Dr. Kervorkian was eventually revoked of his medical license, and even served time in prison for second degree murder after being found guilty for the death of one of his physician-assisted suicides.
            In 1989, a law protecting the discrimination of people with disabilities was established (ISR,488), and this has become one of the main arguments about why people should be allowed to choose to take the path of assisted suicide.  It is argued [B2] that people should be allowed to choose whether or not they wish to live, just as they have a freedom of speech or the right to bear arms.  They argue that someone who has been diagnosed with a terminal illness, or is in excruciating pain, should be allowed to ask for assistance in their own death.  Instead of suffering until death reaches the person on its own, the individual should be allowed to choose to enlist the help of a physician at any point to end the suffering. 
            Another argument presented is the legalization of physician-assisted suicide resulting in counseling for those requesting the service.  It is argued that the counseling could help change someone’s mind.  [B3] As well, if at the end of the counseling, the patient still wanted to follow through with the service, a physician could ensure the process of euthanizing the patient was a success.  This way, the patient could rationally make the decision to end their life, by using the reason and logical calculation that the counseling provided (ES, 15).
            As well, people have argued [B4] that those whom are kept alive by a machine should be allowed the right to enlist the services of physician-assisted suicide.  Someone who doesn’t have any mobility shouldn’t be made to suffer.  Often times, a family member is expected to assist their relative in this decision by taking on the responsibility and concern of the relative (ES, 318).  They should be allowed a way out, other than just “pulling the plug” and dying slowly and painfully.[B5] 
            However, people [B6] have also used this situation to argue that physician-assisted suicide is morally wrong.  If a person is only being kept alive by a machine, and has no mobility whatsoever, they can’t really consent to the service.  A family member would have to consent for them, which could be unjust if the family member does not have the individual’s best interests in mind.  A family member is not able to communicate with the patient any more than the physician can, so it could never fully be determined whether or not the patient wanted to end their life at that moment.
            Physician-assisted suicide is argued [B7] to be wrong because the physician is not God.  Therefore, the physician should not perform god-like acts, such as ending someone’s life.  It is not a person’s choice of when to end their own life or when to end someone else’s.  People should enjoy the opportunity of life that they have, take medication, and be appreciative of what they have, even if they are living with an illness.  This is still more than what others have.
            As well, some people [B8] feel that people who have reached the point of asking for help in committing suicide are no longer in their right mind to make that decision.  43 million people live their lives with a disability that can impair their everyday routines (ISR, 488).  The illness or the pain may have caused the patient to become depressed and possibly delusional, and they may not recognize the other options they have to relieve the pain and help them cope.  Therefore, a physician could not surely say whether or not his service is what the patient is really yearning for.


[B1] Your biggest problem is in text citations, which is relatively easy to address.  See http://ignorantpeoplethinking.blogspot.com/2014/09/other-aspects-of-report1-layout.html

My advice is to keep doing what you're doing and address the comments that I have left here.

 [B2] Who argues this?Give me a citation of an example or quintessential argument.

 [B3]Who argues this? For every perspective, cite an example of that perspective, or if it refers to a specific person only, then cite that specific example

 [B4]citation needed

 [B5]If this is your perspective and not the perspective of the people that you are talking about, then exclude it. For every perspective that you articulate, you should be able to say that it is an influential, common, or interesting perspective of some person other than yourself.

 [B6]Who? Citation needed

 [B7]by whom? Citation needed

 [B8]who? Citation needed"

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